SCOTT MAJOR NOTES
COMEDY (DUMB GIRL)
HIGHSCHOOL ROMANCE
GIRLFRIEND 1 ROMANCE DRAMA
HIGH SCHOOL ROM COM
SHAKESPEARE (LADY M)
GIRLFRIEND 1 (CUT)
EXTERNAL NOTES:
- Too confusing to use on my website
Is this a good shorter cut, or should I keep more of the start in?
HORROR (AMERICAN AUDITION)
CIRCUMSTANCE BELOW, 3 SCENES, A LITTLE CONFUSING WITHOUT CONTEXT
GIRLFRIEND 3
GIRLFRIEND 2
SAME SCENE AS ABOVE
I wanted to use the middle scene, 2, for a showreel clip in my clip library - although it may make no sense I was proud of it.
Two 17 year old female Mormon Ladder Day Saints in love that goes completely against there doctrine Circumstance from script:
Scene 1 - When we are alone together, me touching her
Scene 2 - After she killed me and has finally come back to find my body 21 years later
Scene 3 - Her killing me after she was possessed
GIRLFRIEND
SISTER
AWKWARD GIRL
REVIEWED
Can be cropped further out and upwards, to not include the audience's heads
Same scene, with redirection
BUBBLY BEST FRIEND
Has been cut to before the switch in stakes
- Should I keep the last drama half, this was for my bubble essence
ABUSED VICTIM
SCOTT NOTES:
- Pushing
EXTERNAL NOTES:
- Could've gone harder for what I wanted, wasn't in who am I
- Smiling is off circumstance
SCI FI (AMERICAN)
SCOTT NOTES:
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Nice stuff, importance of the guy, hurt me to not be able to meet him anymore. Fell out with the bounded importance of the person that wasn't in the scene. Not being real
EXTERNAL NOTES:
- Didn't have place
- Didn't feel how scary and 'morbid' the place is
SEDUCTRESS (SCHOOL GIRL)
SPOILT QUEEN - PERIOD (BRITISH)
MEAN GIRL
SCOTT NOTES:
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Reader not on computer its distracting
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Eye line closer to camera
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No power
EXTERNAL NOTES:
- Neck up acting
- Didn't go after what I wanted hard enough and changed tactics when I wasn't getting it.
SCOTT NOTES
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Nice
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Vulnerable
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Spoilt kid that is not
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Hasn't experienced power
EXTERNAL NOTES
- My note was to be more controlled as I'm speaking to the enemy that I want to stay powerful in front of.
- Peter said I didn't care about my thrown enough, this is a queen getting taken off her thrown.
SCOTT NOTES
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Too confusing, Not mean, Too reactionary
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Needs: Confidence, Destroy you
EXTERNAL NOTES
- Got advice that I need me pushing through the line - I was tight for space, but it does lack that physical movement
GOLD DIGGER (COMEDY)
[Booked audition for recurring lead]
SCOTT NOTES:
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Felt more mean girl
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Start wasn't grounded
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End was better. Cut from phone call
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Use for mean girl
EXTERNAL NOTES
- Zoned out by first half, too slow
- Should I cut it to during the phone call?
GIRLFRIEND (MEET CUTE)
SCOTT NOTES:
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Can see the acting
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Before every line I can see the acting work
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Fuck or kill someone
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Not in the moment
EXTERNAL NOTES
- Do I keep any of the start, show the start bit of the clip
- Peter said it's either you want to kill someone or fuck someone and I'm in the middle
SHOOT A REAL SEDUCTRESS
SEDUCTRESS
SCOTT NOTES:
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Better
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Not honest seduction going for the money